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Palmtown Towers, which are neither a town nor a tower but do sport a single sad palm

17 Friday Aug 2012

Posted by nelizadrew in Flash Fiction, Writing

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“Braided essay, story, or poem” prompt from Saturday’s writing group.

Apartment 101

Anna and Bob are arguing again. Their voices spilling down the hallway, bouncing off the concrete and hanging out with the half-dead potted plant.

She wants a man who will buy her happiness.

He wants to know where he can get some for himself, how much it’ll be, and if the struggle to get there is worth getting off the couch.

Apartment 102

Carlos has been kicking the heavy bag in his studio for well over an hour. The yelling next door reminds him of his father, his uncles, his mama and all the people he left behind to come here.

The rhythmic pounding of flesh to leather also reminds him of his father.

At least it drowns out the yelling.

Apartment 103

Dawn has been high for about three years, but she’s recently discovered the best one yet. The pastor on television wants to save her and like all the other pushers, all he wants is money.

Saved. The word holds a prospect of peace and clarity she can’t wait to get her hands on. She wants to be saved.

She’s looking for her wallet.

Apartment 104

Emilio is watching Fabiola cook rice and beans. He’s anxious and he’s hungry and he’s wishing his mama hadn’t gotten remarried and told him he needed to move out. He’s hoping he can talk Fabiola into coming and cooking every night. He gets so hungry living off cereal and chips.

Fabiola’s stirring in turmeric and saffron and hoping she doesn’t burn the rice, that he’ll let her stay since the landlord locked her out of her apartment for not paying the rent.

Apartment 105

A lone ceiling fan spins. The place otherwise sits empty, full of the smell of Fabiola’s shampoo and spicy cooking. It’s waiting for its mistress to return.

Apartment 106

Grant and Hector are counting twenty dollar bills on the scarred table they got off the street. They aren’t speaking because each is planning a way to steal from the other.

Grant shifts his legs so he can get to the pistol holstered at his left ankle.

Hector rubs his nose and glances at the steak knife on the bar beside their empty plates.

Apartment 107

Iphigenia is off her meds.

People are after her. She’s sure.

People are talking about her. She knows. She hears them.

She’s sure there’s a bug in the hall palm. If she can find her baseball bat, she’ll take care of it for good.

Apartment 108

Jack looks at the estimate to get rid of the mold in the building A/C ducts. He knows if he gives it to the owner, the guy’ll fire him for sure. Hire someone who won’t make any trouble, create any expenses.

He looks up the symptoms associated with the mold. Decides, eh, they aren’t so bad. Most of the residents don’t stay too many years. Many are crazy anyway.

He figures he should look for a new place, though.

Apartment 109

Keenan knows what has to be done. All the filth and the disease of the world. He’s been keeping a log of it since he moved in seven years ago. It’s growing. It’s festering.

He lights a match and then a fuse.

Character Interview

06 Friday Nov 2009

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Davis Groves
June 2003

1. How old are you?
Twenty-two for a little longer. I feel older.

2. What kind of work do you do?
I used to be a glorified secretary. Now, I think I am a secretary. Tom likes to call it otherwise — assistant or something. I answer phones and file things.

3. Are you married?
No, and I likely never will be.

4. Do you have any children?
It’s no longer possible. It’s probably better that way.

5. Are you in a good relationship to your spouse or lover?
That might never happen either. I can’t really see how that would work. The last guy was just…too nice. I’m no good for nice guys.

6. Have you ever been unfaithful?
Define unfaithful.

7. Has your partner ever been unfaithful?
Would it matter?

8. What kinds of things make you angry?
People who hurt kids and women.

9. How do you express that anger?
With my fists. With my feet. With foul language. With stony silences. With revenge, when I can.

10. You’re in a scene with someone who is making you very angry. Why? What’s making you angry?
He’s hurting someone I love. He’s hurting someone someone else loves. He needs to be stopped.

11. What memory does the scene bring up?
We don’t really have that kind of time.

12. What memory does the memory bring up?
I can’t really discuss that with you. I’m not paying your therapy bills.

13. Describe something really bad you once did.
Does killing someone count? I lie a lot. I usually have a good reason, though.

14. Where did you grow up?
An apartment here, a rusty car there. The back roads and the motels of America.

15. What did your father do?
I’m not sure. He was there. He traveled with us. Then he left. Then he died. His job may have been to keep Charley sane because after he left, she got a lot worse.

16. What about your mother? What was she like?
She does too many drugs. She takes too many chances. She tries to take her life too often. She worships random deities she hears about from other drug addicts and conspiracy nuts. She probably still thinks I’m dead.

17. How did your parents get along?
Until he decided being gay was more fun than being with her, they seemed to keep each other alive.

18. Do you have any brothers or sisters?
I had two sisters growing up. Well, I had one sister and one “daughter” that we raised poorly.

19. What was the thing that scared you most as a kid?
Losing my older sister. Without her, I couldn’t have survived everything else.

20. Character, be the child you once were. Write about your world from the point of view of the child. What do you see? Feel? Write a scene. Show, don’t tell.
How about this one?
This one was a mess, too.

21. What’s making you run so fast?
If I don’t run, I’ll end up dead. Well, I’ll end up dead again. Or worse, I’ll have to think about stuff other than putting one foot in front of the other and breathing. Running’s easier than all that.

22. Who are you running from?
The things that are out there. The things I keep in here.

23. Who do you hate?
I used to hate Eric.

24. Why are you crying?
I’m fine. Everything’s fine.

25. What’s hurting you?
Nothing at the moment. I mean, I have a good-sized bruise from sparring with Franco at the gym, but that’s okay.

26. What’s making you so sad? Write a scene.
I’m not sad. Didn’t we just cover this? I’m fine. Everything’s fine. Everything’s wonderful. Great.

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